Feedback Journal Guidelines and Rubric
HCM 415 Feedback Journal Guidelines and Rubric
You have now submitted and received feedback on all milestones, which are parts of the final project. Review all the feedback you have received from your instructor so far. Write a journal assignment that describes your approach to implementing the feedback you have received. In the assignment, be sure to address the following:
A. Provide a general introduction describing the areas where you showed proficiency and the areas where you need improvement. B. Identify specific issues your instructor noted that you agree with, and describe how you will address them. For example, if your instructor noted a place
where more information was needed, what additional information will you include, and how will it help clarify your analysis? C. Identify specific issues your instructor noted that you disagree with, and explain why you disagree. For example, if your instructor noted a place where
your conclusions were incomplete, express why they were not. D. Describe the steps you will take to make improvements in your final draft.
Guidelines for Submission: Submit assignment as a Word document with double spacing, 12-point Times New Roman font, and one-inch margins.
Critical Element Exemplary (100%) Proficient (90%) Needs Improvement (75%) Not Evident (0%) Value
General Introduction Meets “Proficient” criteria, and introduction is exceptionally clear and concise
Provides a general introduction describing the areas where you showed proficiency and the areas where you need improvement
Provides a general introduction describing the areas where you showed proficiency and the areas where you need improvement, but the introduction is too wordy
Does not provide a general introduction describing the areas where you showed proficiency and the areas where you need improvement
25
Specific Issues: Agree Meets “Proficient” criteria, and the explanation of how you will address the issues is particularly clear
Identifies specific issues the instructor noted that you agree with and describes how you will address them
Identifies specific issues the instructor noted that you agree with and describes how you will address them, but the description is not relevant to the issue or lacks detail
Does not identify specific issues the instructor noted that you agree with nor describe how you will address them
25
Specific Issues: Disagree
Meets “Proficient” criteria, and the explanation of why you disagree is particularly clear and logical
Identifies specific issues the instructor noted that you disagree with and explains why you disagree
Identifies specific issues the instructor noted that you disagree with and explains why you disagree, but the explanation is unclear or illogical or lacks detail
Does not identify specific issues the instructor noted that you disagree with nor explain why you disagree
25
Steps Meets “Proficient” criteria, and the steps are particularly clear and logical and address the issues described
Describes the steps you will take to make improvements in your final draft
Describes the steps you will take to make improvements in your final draft, but the steps are illogical, lack detail, or do not pertain to the issues you described
Does not describe the steps you will take to make improvements in your final draft
25
Total 100%